Alexandra Walter's blog

It was a little bit depressing to get back my biodata and topic outline. I still make too many mistakes. I really hope that during the semester I can improve my writing skills.

I do not exactly know why I read over my mistakes and do not recognize them. When somebody corrects it, it is clear for my what is wrong. Has anybody some advices for me how I can ameliorate in this section?

I already did my outline for my thesis and it is a little bit hard for me because I want to deal with more points than just those I have chosen. (My thesis is that the people who live below the poverty line still need child labour to survive). I hope that my outline and the structuring of sources helps me to just deal with the relevant facts and additionally to isolate points I do not really need for my paper.

See you all on Tuesday,

best regards, Alex