This week I have recieved the first feedback on my paper and I have to admit I have mixed feelings about it. Although I expected certain points of criticism I guess I just hoped it would be fine. I'm struggling pretty much with turning my descriptive essay into an argumetative one....
Besides (and this is defintiely a point I expected) I have to narrow the topic (Wrested islands, with the Falkland Islands, the Senkaku Islands and the Alhucemas Islands as different examples for economic, political, social and cultural conflict). But where to lower one's sight? Is there anybody who faces a similar situation? How do you approach that?
Very well, let's see how next class is going...

Have a good night :)