Johann´s Academic Writing Blog S2012

The in-class discussion with Dr.Brewster and some fellow students helped me to rethink my paper topic redefine my working title. Moreover, I changed some ideas in my proposal according to the suggestions.

As the working title should not be a question, like I had it before, and, as it should already state an idea of the final conclusion of the paper, I changed it as follows: Junk food taxation would have positive effects on the Austrian health economy. I also talked to Dr.Pruckner, and discussed, how I should justify my conclusion and how I could construct my chain of argumentation.