Katerina_Academic Writing_S2012

Last time we got feedback on our proposals from the professor. Mine was not bad but I still have to work a lot and research a lot to have a good results and to write a good paper. Now, I am concentrating on revising the introduction and conclusion parts and I hope that I did a good job. I still need to do my middle part but almost half of the sentence outline is already done. I am very excited about our next meeting and hope that the 3 parst that I wrote are good.