Dear students!

The discussion of the first draft of the paper in the last session was pretty good for me to get some feedback about the work. I got some advice to improve certain paragraphs or to rephrase specific segments. I will definitely implement this suggestions into the final draft of my re-search.

Every lesson I feel that I become more confident in writing an academic paper as we receive important rules, hints and principles one by one during class. Hence, the research continuously assumes shape. For the following week I pursue to optimize the smoothness of the paper as well as correct citations and references.

I am assertive that most of the rough work is already done. Currently, the review and smaller adjustments make up the first priority. In order to submit a proper first draft for the next time, I will possibly ask some friends for a peer review of my work.

See you next week!

Christian